English 2042- Writing Assignment #5:  Google Image Analysis

Editor:________________________________ Writer:____________________________

Writer:   Please turn in this editing sheet along with the printout the editor responded to when you submit your final copy. 

Editor:  Work with printout of Analysis. 

1. Are all pages printing out appropriately?  Yes___ No___
Indicate any problem pages here:

2.  Is the printout clean and clear with all text lines present? (Vertical mode)  Yes___ No___

3.  Is the 9 cell table uniform with all cells of equal dimensions? Yes___ No___
4.  Are the cells beveled and contoured in PS to give a 3D effect? Yes___ No___

5.  Text has title and is chunked with subheads Yes___ No___
6.  Text is illustrated with graphics appropriately placed with cell padding Yes___ No___

7.  No text bumps up against any edges with no padding Yes___ No___

8.  Text does not take up entire horizontal web space across page, but only about 3 inches.  Yes___No___

9.  Interesting lead --    Yes___ No___

10.  Introductory Device—   Yes___ No___  Which One?        

11.  Purpose/thesis – Is purpose for article set up in the beginning paragraphs?  Yes___No___   

            Briefly state the purpose/topic here:

Check that writer is not violating any online conventions:

• As always, keep CRAPP principles in mind  Yes___ No___
• Use an interesting typeface Yes___ No___
• Avoid ALL CAPS and long sections of italics  Yes___ No___
• Don't double-space text  Yes___ No___
• Don't indent paragraphs  Yes___ No___
• Be sure ALL links work on ALL pages  Yes___ No___
• Be sure to check "resample picture to match size" when you see the tiny picture icon appear in the bottom right corner of a picture you have placed in Frontpage. Resampling makes for faster downloading.  Yes___ No___
• Each webpage should have a Text Title that identifies the purpose of the page.  Yes___ No___
• Don't put colons (:) after Heads or Subheads  Yes___ No___
• Don't leave borders on tables  Yes___ No___

12. Organization –

(A).  Number the paragraphs in the text and give each a two-word label.  What organization scheme seems to be present?  Should it be changed?

(B).    Does each paragraph contain only one main idea?  Yes____ No____

Indicate Number of Problem Paragraphs:

13. Concluding device— Yes___ No___  Which One?  (No summaries please)

14.  At the end of the text page, the URL's of all images used in this assignment are listed?  Yes___ No___

15.   Transitions—

Are transition devices present in the first sentence of every paragraph?   Yes___ No___

If not, which paragraphs need them?     _______________

16.   Development:

Is paper 750 words long? (Text should NOT be double spaced on web)? Yes___

No___

Is there enough proof/support for the writer’s argument?

            Overall statistics (how many images and of what?) leading to appropriate generalizations?    Yes____ No____

            One or two particular image examples analyzed in greater detail?  Yes____ No____

Are at least six of the following concepts dealt with in the comparison of the two images?

Indicate problems here:

17.  Sentence Level Concerns

Are sentence lengths varied?   Yes____ No____

            Are any very short sentences included? Yes___ No___

18.  Go to paragraphs 2,3, and 4

Circle forms of  “to be”  (Is, are, am, were, was, be, been, being) 

How many sentences in this essay?____

How many “to be” verbs?­­­­­____

What is the ratio of Total # “to be” verbs / # sentences?

Is it over 50%?___ Yes ___No--  If so, the writer needs to revise extensively.

19.  Go to paragraphs 5, 6, and 7

Circle sentence beginnings. 

How many sentences in this essay?____

How many noun begun sentences are there?  (Beauty)  or nouns with an article (the

 advertisement) ____

What is the ratio of noun begun sentences / # sentences?____

Do nouns begin sentences more than 50% of the time?  ___Yes ___No

If so, the writer needs to revise. 

20.  Go to paragraph # 5.  Get rid of 5 unnecessary words.  List them here:

21.  Underline any grammar problems or sentences which are unclear or hear to read.  Don't neglect this step.  And don’t hold back.  It is very important for the writer.  How many such sentences did you underline?  ___________________